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[Novel Chapters] Love Quarantime - Chapter 1

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Love QuarantimeChapter 1The Unexpected Encounter It was a time of uncertainty and stillness. The year was 2019, and the world...

[Novel Chapter] Love Quarantime - Prologue

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Love QuarantimePrologue This happened not so long ago, amidst the raging COVID-19 PANDEMIC. Gill didn't know if he would be grateful...

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Anonymous said, "This is an extremely enjoyable poem. The tone is formal. It suits the subject matter very well. The poem celebrates nature and all its glory. The reader is fascinated by vivid image of nature they get as they read. The reader will read to the very last word. The rhyme is well done and consistent. It gives the poem a wonderful rhyme. The meter is consistent from line to line. The poem flows extremely well. It is a pleasure to read. You have used punctuation and grammar consistently in this poem. There is nothing to distract the reader from their reading pleasure. Great job." on Mar 28 2025

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